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Old 2005-05-13, 05:17 PM   #2
Bill
Selling porn allows me to stay in a constant state of Bliss - ain't that a trip!
 
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I like it.

In a genre infamous for shitty writing, you are definitely slugging that keyboard.

I get the sense of a deeper point-of-view which is still obscure, but punching it's way out.

That's a roundabout way of saying I'd like to see you clarify your point, or lack of a point, in certain spots.
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