Howdy!
The first thing I see that I don't like is the 2257 page. Far too many links there to unnecesary crap. Copy the statement to a text file and upload it to your server. Link to that text file.
You already know that the vid caps are going to get you denied at most of the big places. You might get away with them if you submit to the webcam category, but no promises.
The chick is hot |cool| and has great amateur appeal.
Some places are going to deny you for the lack of nudity in the first gallery. I wouldn't, but that's because I like a little tease factor now and then. The second gallery is sweet. Good progression from dressed to nude with masturbation in the mix. If I didn't have kids in the house,
this would become my new desktop background.
The ad text on both galleries appears identical. Don't do that. Use different sales pitches on each page. Keep pushing the sale forward.