I see alot of spot on advice posted here. Here's what I noticed, btw I'm on Netscape browser..
One of your gallery pages have 5 links (one to a links page, 4 sponsor links). That's 2 too many for alot of LLs.
Also, I see pages where the source is one line long, so I'm guessing it's script generated. If I was a reviewer, I'd like to be able to read the source code.
Are you using scripts to generate as many free sites as possible using a template, rotating colors and other variables?
Your banner on sexdugs/blow/ gallery is blind. It needs to say more than sample1 $4.87 three days.
You still have javascript on some pages. No one will accept your site until you get rid of it.
If you want to insert dates into your pages, use PHP.
<? echo date("Y-m-d-"); ?> or whatever will get the job done...although I don't really see the point of dating your free sites.
The Asian site looks the best overall, but as MML said those are vid caps. If that's all you find in a sponsor's free content area, shoot an email to your sponsor and ask for a few pics, promote someone else, or just buy your own content.