I'd change around your sales philosophy, especially with you selling a mega amateur site. Maybe make galleries of 3 different girls with a thumbnail preview on the main page, then an ad underneath telling the surfer these girls are from the mega amateur site.
The text also looks bland to me, but that's probably because I don't have the Tempus Sans ITC font on my machine - I'm not sure how common a font that is, but when I build I tend to stick to basic fonts (arial, comic sans, verdana, etc)
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