If someone would like to get all the bullet points together, I'd be happy to go over the copy and polish it. I'm a published writer, editor and back in the day I won awards for some of my work. I know the tone we need and I can nail it, so I'd be happy to be the pointman on eloquence for this little project. An old friend used to say that my specialty was "masturbation of the written word," so my skills may be just what the doctor ordered
The best adult biz reference I can give on my writing is Simon, as I've done some extensive work for him. LMK if I'm needed
