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Halfdeck · 2006-02-20, 06:25 AM

Your pictures are too bland imo. If they're sponsor content, I'd replace them with something a little more exciting.

The thumbs look muddy. You can make 'em look better without increasing their filesizes much.

Since this is an APC site you're promoting, it'd be a little more surfer friendly if you used a mouseover that displayed the paysite domain in the stats bar instead of apc.com. Up to you.

Last thing -- your site doesn't pass the Roman Maroni test:

"Hi there my names Jen Padova." Hi there (, or .) My name is

Problem is I'm such messy girl that I end up with spit all over little titties. --> Problem is I'm such a messy girl that I end up with spit all over my little titties

You like that... --> You like that?

So, I see your still here. --> I see you're

Have you been searching net looking for that something extra? --> searching THE NET

Well inside Throatjobs.com theres tens of fresh faced amateurs --> there's. Also, Well inside is a run-on. Rewrite it to Well, inside

Good luck

2006-02-20, 06:25 AM	#10
Halfdeck You can now put whatever you want in this space :) Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: New Haven, CT Posts: 985	Your pictures are too bland imo. If they're sponsor content, I'd replace them with something a little more exciting. The thumbs look muddy. You can make 'em look better without increasing their filesizes much. Since this is an APC site you're promoting, it'd be a little more surfer friendly if you used a mouseover that displayed the paysite domain in the stats bar instead of apc.com. Up to you. Last thing -- your site doesn't pass the Roman Maroni test: "Hi there my names Jen Padova." Hi there (, or .) My name is Problem is I'm such messy girl that I end up with spit all over little titties. --> Problem is I'm such a messy girl that I end up with spit all over my little titties You like that... --> You like that? So, I see your still here. --> I see you're Have you been searching net looking for that something extra? --> searching THE NET Well inside Throatjobs.com theres tens of fresh faced amateurs --> there's. Also, Well inside is a run-on. Rewrite it to Well, inside Good luck __________________ Success is going from failure to failure without a loss of enthusiasm. Last edited by Halfdeck; 2006-02-20 at 06:32 AM..