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See you took some of the ideas from your last post and its starting to look better. A few thoughts:
Pages:
Text still looking a little crunched around the edges... spacing. Did you mean to put two internal links to your own site right next to each other? (Jake's Adult & Free Porn Links) on the entry page?
Content pages:
Your missing a link back to the main page from each content page. Make the surfer go back to the main page and look at your ads to get to the second content page.
I see you've added a second sponsor site to your content pages, now add a little sales text too to tell the surfer why they might want to visit that site.
"Alt tags" on your pictures should describe what the picture is about. This gives you a chance to use and add some "keywords" to your site. Don't overdo it, a few words in a short sentence is all that's needed. Keyword stuffing is frowned upon by the SE's.
Same thing with the "Title" and "Content" meta tags. Change them to be different from each other and reflect the page you are showing not necessarily the site you are promoting.
Looks better in Firefox than your other site but still a little spacing problems around the banners.
How's the load speed with those animated banners and 16 pics?
Hope this helps!
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