Hi Star Man,
Your color-scheme would tempt me to reject, but frankly I have seen worse.
Go for a unique title for a free site. Don't name them after the paysite you're promoting. Some reviewers will reject you for that.
Banners on index rotates real slowly. Till the paysite name rotates in (after 10 seconds wait) your text is effectively blind.
Also, I find that video sponsor irrelevant to the traffic you're targetting with your free site. Personally, I'd remove that ad, but that's just me.
One thing you definitely need to fix before submitting is the pics size.
Otherwise, you're good to go
