Yep, you're definitely on the right track
Agree with Halfdeck...the image quality isn't great. But, I'm not sure how much quality can be expected when the shots are taken in that environment. The quality is a lot better than the last site and definitely not a reason for decline imo.
I'm not real crazy about the underline changing to overline on mouseover, but that's a personal preference. Again, not something I'd decline a site for on its own.
This site is however going to be difficult in the hardcore category. There's one oral pic in the first gallery and maybe 4 or 5 in gallery two...hard to say for sure due to the whole 'party' thang going on. I've never been inside that particular paysite, but the content used to promote it sure isn't impressive.
Overall, your site design is fine though