Yep, ya did get real clean with that one
I agree with the other comments...punch up your text. Talk about Lauren a bit more...about what makes her so hot...about what her site can offer that surfer to meet his 'needs'.
Added: Hell, you know Lauren intimately...run with that knowledge a little on your sites. Let your mind go to your fingers...what about Lauren pushes YOUR buttons
Preacher is right...'Click Here to Visit Me Now' is borderline. Since it's her site...it's a close call, but remember the cardinal rule...don't give reviewers reasons to decline your site
