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Preacher · 2006-07-11, 07:23 PM

I didn't even get past the index and honestly don't have to.

Problems:

2/3 of you text links are completely blind. If you don't know what a blind link is try searching this forum.
Your grasp of English is pretty poor. Many LL's will deny or outright ban you for the poor sentence structure & mispellings.
Is your exit link non-adult?

Suggestions:

Add text! Like more unlinked sales text, a 2257 declaration, anything, because right now, most of your text on that page is linked.
That background is horrible. I'm sometimes guilty of this myself, but if you think this looks good, then scrap that background and just go with a plain color. No one wants to get a headache just from looking at porn.

Work on your index first. Then maybe someone will take a look at the rest of your freesite.

2006-07-11, 07:23 PM	#2
Preacher There's Xanax in my thurible! Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Wherever they screw on my head Posts: 2,441	I didn't even get past the index and honestly don't have to. Problems: 2/3 of you text links are completely blind. If you don't know what a blind link is try searching this forum. Your grasp of English is pretty poor. Many LL's will deny or outright ban you for the poor sentence structure & mispellings. Is your exit link non-adult? Suggestions: Add text! Like more unlinked sales text, a 2257 declaration, anything, because right now, most of your text on that page is linked. That background is horrible. I'm sometimes guilty of this myself, but if you think this looks good, then scrap that background and just go with a plain color. No one wants to get a headache just from looking at porn. Work on your index first. Then maybe someone will take a look at the rest of your freesite. __________________ NSCash * This Depraved World