Much better, I made it past the index, but there are still a couple of issues.
First and foremost you need to get that domain registered in your own name. Is Dreamhost that host that retains their client names? Anybody else recall hearing that?
Personal opinion, your large links on the front page could be a tad smaller, it probably would not keep you from getting listed, but they look a bit big to me, but they are no longer blind. The copied text from the sponsor is much better then what you had before.
Your main page is fine as is to get you listed.
Your galleries have blind links:
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Ad the text, "then tour" or "at paysitename.com" and they no longer would be.
And personally, I would AT LEAST link to the sponsor's 2257 page, but it shouldn't keep you from getting listed. But with a watersports site especially, you want all your bases covered.
None of the rest of this matters though if you can't get your whois information to reflect your name as the owner of that site and not Dreamhost. That will cost you listings at all but the smallest linklists.