Tiny, The basics are there
Some of the text is a bit hard to read... - try playing with the BG colour and the TEXT colour
Some of the text needs centering too.
The bottom banner on -
http://www.tinysplace.com/free/chubby/brandi/gal1.html - looks like it is built for a WHITE background. ? and therefore looks a bit tacky..
Same on the second gallery..
Yep - you need more text..
It's a decent start.. and I have seen worse submitted;(
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