Welcome to GG&J Zio
There is a welcome thread...you should probably pop in there and say hello too
On to your site...
Looks like as of today, your domain is on the spam blacklist...you'll want to get that fixed.
http://whois.domaintools.com/toxsite.com
Entry page...
Wow! Your keywords meta is pretty well jampacked. No need to spam your keywords meta...it doesn't do you any good. You really don't want any words in there that aren't on the page.
Javascript is a no no on free sites.
You can have up to 3 sponsor links per page, I'd suggest you utilize them. Even though, you're promoting your own site...might as well get the surfer to the juicy stuff asap
Main page...
I don't see any problems here
Gallery One...
"After enjoying these free samples, Visit Us" could be considered a borderline blind link if you were promoting a sponsor paysite. Given that you're promoting your own site, I'd have no problem with those links.
Some of your full size pics are on the heavy side, though not enough to cause a decline imo. Try to keep those full sized images down to 50-75k.
Gallery Two...
Here you do have a few pics that are huge and will likely cause declines. Anything over about 80k and you're pushing your luck.
Also, some of the thumbs look pretty funky with the gray borders top and bottom. If it's a horizontal image, either crop it to fit vertically...or adjust your gallery to display it horizontally.
That's all I got...all in all...a pretty darned nice site. Some minor tweaks and you should be good to go