Hi, welcome.
Index:
Way too much linked text in that ad box. Many lists say they accept up to 3 lines of linked text.
I'd take Tommy's recip off as you need a submitters account to get listed there and if you are new you most likely do not have one.
Main:
Looks good to me.
Galleries:
Too much linked text again.
Some of those pictures are kinda blurry.
Some of the pictures appear to be over 100K. A few linklists want them under 80, most want them under 100k.
Other then that, it looks really good.