Thank you so much for your comments!
I updated the gallery quite a bit; I changed the title, added new thumbs and new pics, and made the changes to the links like you said. I think it's pretty good, and I'm going to try a submit and see what happens.
If anyone else has any comments to add, I'm still and always ready to accept constructive criticism!
New url:
http://hornyfrank.com/free/she-loves-deepthroat/