I don't see a title on your index page, a title on the page itself that is.
And "Faith Belle makes your knob hard" is not a good title anyway. First of all you don't know if she's going to make my knob hard
and second it's 6 words which is way too long for a title.
(yes I rejected it for that call me whatever you want
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Your sponsor links "...you'll meet here!" might be cosidered blind links since the surfer doesn't know where he's going. "You'll meet me at blablabla.com" would be better.
Your sponsor links open in new windows which is a big NO at most LL's
There ya go
Oh, and welcome to the board