"see Cooke spreading her pussy wide click here." this is a blind link I think, it should have some indication that the link will take you to the sponsors page
You only have 2 outgoing links on your main page, you are allowed to have 3 and I would recommend it.
other than that the site looks fine, now all you need to do is put my recip in there too
You still have a small side scroll at 800px wide but I think most LL's will let that small side scroll slide