Thanks for all the responses, they have been a big help
MrYum, I know the site title is too long for most submitting. My exprience with tgps is that I need 3 or 4 titles of varying lengths, so I generally make a long title and just use parts of it as the submitted title depending on what the rules state.
As for adding tease text, I agree, but thats for as the site templates grow and develop. I figured it was best start with something basic and work my way up to adding my poor attempts at sales text
JohnnyBG I agree, best to get the most out of the traffic, but I started with a clean template to get the idea. I'll modify and develop it, adding more links to sponsor as I get better at this. I thought it would be better to have a clean, simple design and work my way from there as I learn more.
GreenGuy, I'll take that as a the response to my appeal
Thank you!
I did already move the site to a new domain and fix the html problems
http://www.firm-bodies.com/tpv/charbath/index.html
But its nice to know that blacklist problem is fixed
I'm off to submit my first site
thanks again
Khor