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Chop Smith · 2006-10-23, 07:45 PM

Okay you yankee boys know best but I think "We, as a whole believe..." should be "We, as a whole, believe..."

I am not a lawyer but I watch "Law and Order". I might replace 'insidious' with another adjective. Up to that point it appears you were making wise choice of words.

Good work Jim.

2006-10-23, 07:45 PM	#8
Chop Smith Eighteen 'til I Die Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: Mississippi Posts: 2,168	Okay you yankee boys know best but I think "We, as a whole believe..." should be "We, as a whole, believe..." I am not a lawyer but I watch "Law and Order". I might replace 'insidious' with another adjective. Up to that point it appears you were making wise choice of words. Good work Jim. __________________