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The above along with the small images & text isn't selling interracial, if it must be included it should be at the very bottom. Personally, I'd rather see that "sold" on the site tour.
The 12 photos with three lines of text each is what I find the most distracting. Essentially, it's "too much". I'd cut it back to 3 or 4 slightly larger photos showing some of your "best stuff", and lose the text completely.
Just my 2¢ as a TGP owner and gallery builder.