I'm in the midst of doing reviews right now anyway...will slide one in here for ya
Warning page...
Slight side scroll at 800 px wide, these days some decline for it, some don't. Greenie shoke things up a while back and changed his rules to 1024 wide, so many have relaxed a bit on the 800 wide.
Your free site can't have the same title or nearly the same title as the paysite you're promoting. That's an instant decline with most reviewers.
I agree with Beenie, in that you could make your paysite links a more prominent on the warning page.
Main page...
Plain, simple and clean. No real problems here, but again you could make the ads more enticing.
Galleries...
Definitely fix the side scroll...that will cause declines with a lot of reviewers with it scrolling at 1024 wide.
You do have a little more content than you need, though not a ton. As long as you've got at least 120 secs, you're good to go. There are a handful of sites that'll give you a little bump in their rankings if your site warrants. Sometimes a little extra content doesn't hurt with that...but don't go over the top with content either. There are those (myself included), that will decline for too much content.
That's a pretty good first pass, with some minor tweaks...you're good to go
