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Originally Posted by trying2win2
Hi Greenie
My site also got rejected because of:
Poor Grammar or Spelling Errors
Can you take a look please? I cannot for the life of me spot the errors. I am still new to this and still learning, so my sites aren't great. Apologies if I am supposed to introduce myself first, I will do that this evening after work
http://www.gay-o-rama.co.uk/free-sit...n-cocksuckers/
Why is aol listed as a free email addie? It is the only email address I have (apart from yahoo) and I am sure that greenguy lists aol as a free email. I also tried safe-mail.net to see if that worked.
Thanks
Nick |
1st off, the title you submitted is way too long:
German boys in 100% hardcore ass fucking, cock sucking and swallowing huge cock full of hot creamy cum
You're grammar is not that bad (some of it can be cleaned up a bit so that you don't have to scratch your head when you read it) but if I reviewed it, I'd have rejected it for:
Site Structure - your recips are all left aligned in the cells & there's text on the site that looks like it should be centered
Vid Caps - we don't list sites with vid caps as the content