I am not really a big fan of poor grammar blacklisting but, I can see how it would happen if sites with poor grammar were submitted after warning.
So, looking at your first site.
Who ever said Bisex was easy?
Not "Three Pillows" that's for sure.
As they all fight like cat and dog
(Should be "Cats and Dogs")
(bitch and vixen?)
(Are you asking a question? This part shouldn't even be there)
to be in
among the sex action,
(Should be, "to be in the sex action.")
who wants to do paperwork when
there's fucking to be done.
(The who should be "Who" and instead of a period at the end, you want a question mark)
Take Suck a Dick Suzy here, her day job at "Three Pillows" is
paper clip counter in accounts! Larry & Harry are qualified
pencil sharper technicians.
(This should be, "Take Suck a Dick Suzy here. Her day job at "Three Pillows" is paper clip counter in accounts. Larry & Harry are qualified pencil sharpener technicians.")
Bisex is not even a word.
It goes on and on with grammatical errors. That was just the first part of the first site.
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