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I'm shocked that it was not rejected for the gigantic blind links on your index page...sorry to inject myself in GGs thread but I would like to help.
Since I am in a nice mood I will correct your grammar for free ;-)
Her name is Brea. She looks so innocent. So cool and elegant,so prim and proper with her slim legs and cute blonde hair. Look at their big bobbies, and her perfect body, she is really sexy!
Her name is Brea. She looks so innocent. So cool and elegant,(space here)so prim and proper with her slim legs and cute blonde hair. Look at their(use either those or her) big bobbies(use boobies...I think bobbies are british cops or something),(you don't need commas before and) and her perfect body, she is really sexy!
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