Yes Lesa definitely a good start and the text recips look just fine. But you'll get refused automatically at most LL's for blind links. This is where you link to a sponsor but don't give the sponsor's name. On your first site, Charlie Lane, the main page link:'Check other hot babes showing everything' is blind. On Gallery 1 and 2, ' Enter here for more' is also a blind link.
Also on Charlie Lane you're not using your full quota of links out. You won't get refused for this but you might as well use your 3 sponsor links on each page. That's what gets you the sales.
One other point. When you use a sponsor banner put your own text advert with it, preferably above and below it. This more or less triples your advertising from that one banner and it still classes as one outgoing link.
Don't be discouraged. That's a very promising start.
