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Originally Posted by jgaraza
i put ... her perfects tits will make you desire to put your cock between them ... i think is ok
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"Her perfects tits will make you desire to put your cock between them."
Is okay (you are getting there!) and would probably get you by but it still isn't very natural (normal) talk.
better IMHO might be:
"Babe with perfect tits will make you want to stick your cock between them."
or
"This hot babe is perfect for a nice titty fuck!"
Something like this. I'm not the best with descriptions either but I think these sound better. I have an idea for you. Perhaps you can find a native English speaking webmaster who will go over (in private) your site descriptions and sites before you submit them. Maybe in exchange for something like a good link back somewhere or for you signing up with the sponsor using their referral code. Or perhaps someone has a site or two they need translated in spanish.
I do not have a lot of free time otherwise I'd help but maybe someone here might be willing in exchange for some sort of minor compensation such as the above. Might be worth a shot anyway.
