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Old 2007-08-28, 03:35 AM   #2
AndyS
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Just my first impressions are
- There are too many links on each page
- Not sure why you have two index pages with recips and if this would be allowed
- Keywords and description need to be swapped round
- Personally I would focus on selling just one site and get more text in there
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