Hi Jesse U
Warning Page
You should use more recips on your warning page - as many as 15 or so is acceptable. My LL and most others won't accept below 6.
Your banners should have sales text above and below them. Text sells better than banners and banners on their own get ignored by most surfers.
Your Enter link should be below the recips - otherwise its an automatic refusal at most LL's.
Main Page
You need to use a lot more sales text.This is your main selling page and you should try to hit the surfers here. Just a couple of identical banners doesn't cut it at all. Drop a banner and replace it with text. If you can't think of sales text take a look at the Sponsor's tour - you should get lots of ideas.
Galleries
Ten pics will get you refused at Greenie's LL - its 12 min per gallery.
Again you've used the same banner. You must get more variety into your sales pitch.
Don't be put off. For a first site you've done very well. The basic layout is good and its a nice clean design. Change the points I've mentioned and let's have another look.
