[Licker4U]

Not bad for a first site. On the index page I would tuck the text under the first banner up closer to the banner and I would make the Enter link a little larger, it's pretty obvious that it's the Enter link since it's down there all by itself but it wouldn't hurt to make it a little larger. At the bottom of your stories, I would say "Click here for the full story at (insert sponsor's name). That way the surfer knows where they're going. I'm sure more knowledgable people will add their .02.