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Hey Haileybbw,
I like the background and I think you are off to a good start. I do have just a few suggestions as I work with CCBill programs every day.
First, I have to get to the third page to see your sales pitch. I understand having the warning page, but that should enter to your main tour page.
Second, on the tour page, you need more pics and more tease either through text or pics. Make sure everyone knows how awesome the Member's Area and what the surfer gets for his money. Things like "hundreds of pics!" "hundreds of exclusive videos!" "Cam sessions!" "I answer all email!" things like that help in the sales pitch as much as good images.
Third, I like having the CCBill logo on this page as this is a very trusted and recognized processor that surfers recognize, but that is not linked to the join page. When in doubt I try to link everything to the join page.
I hope you do very well and I wish you a lot of luck!
Matt
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