Not a reviewer here, but for what it's worth -
1. Try to not to link entire paragraphs. I think a structure of some intro text, then a shorter 1-2 lines link, is easier on the eyes and more likely to get your surfer looking at it and possibly clicking.
2. Not sure why you would give them 3 galleries, when 2 is enough. We need to cut down on all the free porn
3. I would go with sales text that explains why the paysite is better than the freesite (i.e. movies, hi-res pics etc).
4. If you convert the recips to unified looking text-links, you should be able to put 16-20 recips per table easily. Will give you a nice streamlined look IMO.