That's a good first page, mostly. I'd go with a more traditional kind of menu instead of the symbols at the bottom, and change the "Free Tour" to something like "More", so it doesn't scream at the surfer that it will cost money.
That's the same reason I hate the 3 button sites, "Join" "Members" "Tour"
At least give the surfer a chance to get half a hardon before you tell them it will cost to really get off
