Welcome to the board liontamer
1 - I'd put that "True connoisseurs know..." text into a table that's 6-700 wide so that it's not the only thing sticking out on the sides of the page
2 - "Enter Club Strawberry..." text link will get you declined on a lot of link lists - we like to see only one link with the word "enter" in it & that is the enter link
Also, having that text a font size bigger then the enter link is not helping matters
3 - the main page looks "off" to me - see the image I've attached below to see what I mean
4 - the galeries look ok, but you could tighten them up a bit & try to use the same size thumbs for everything - it makes the page flow a little better (the way you have it now, with different length's & height's looks unprofessional to me)
5 -
http://www.cyber-nude.com/redheads/images/Gal2/004.jpg - while the rule of thumb is 500 on one side of the pics, pics like this are not going to cut it.
All told, it's not bad, just a little tweaking I guess