I'll give you my humble opinion, and I am sure the more experienced webmasters will have more to say.
2257 page: You will get declined at most LL because of the links to porn on the page. I f the sponsor doesn't have a clean 2257 page, copy the info and hosted on your server.
Mouseover: I don't think that is a problem, but I am not sure.
Page title: I think that is fine, but I would write the number three if I were you, just an opinion.
Recips: Text is fine with most LL, the only problem might be the link to cooladultlinks, it may be considered a blind link since the name of the LL doesn't appear on the link.
Otherwise, I think that the site looks good, especially for the first one.
