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Start with the simple stuff: spell BLACK correctly, not BALCK. That is a big start.
The sponsor site isn't a preggo site, so why bother talking up the preggo aspect? Just accept the girl as she is and make a site that tries to attract people to the target site. If I listed it, I would put it in with other preggo sites, which wouldn't get you the ethnic / interracial traffic you are looking for. You will get hits. You won't get results.
Your index.html page looks very generic, almost like something in a premade template from an auto submitter / site builder.
I don't like the graphics for gallery 1 gallery 2, they are not as clear on my monitor as other parts of the site.
Alex
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