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Originally posted by urb
That's quite a lot of text imo.
Can I make two constructive observations?
1) Every paragraph starts with the word "Alright".
2) 2nd, 3rd & 4th paragraphs are all in caps.
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I can nuke the "alright" from the text and would it be better in your opinion to make all the paragraphs all caps or just use normal text?