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OK... that is cool you posted an example.
Apart from the part where I have a nasty eye disorder that I cant read captials... and you start ever para with "alright" your text actually isnt too bad. You are pushing your main keywords too hard (I would take off the bold) but all in all its a good description of the site.
Dave is right when he says text can be spammy, but if you use it well, and see the surfers as your friends and really tell them about something (content) then text is magic.
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