tat2jr - If you need some help with critiques post the sites before you get them finalized. I'm sure you can get some valuable info on getting conversions up, increasing search engine traffic, and making the sites fit into what alot of places are looking for.
If you don't want to post the sites before you release them shoot me a PM and I will review the site privately and shoot you some advice..
Off the top of my head I would just like to mention that you are skipping some really important items on your sites for the Search Engines..other than that though .. hats off to you bro for getting some FHS up and going .. I wish others would follow suit.
Gideon