Hi AndyProject,
Not bad for a first attempt, and I go with what the others have said by and large
One small piece of constructive critisism [I hope it's consdtructive] is that your 'menu' page has more than three 'outgoing links'. That is links to other sites which appear to be sponsor [or your own other site] links
As I understand it, this is normally rejected by an increasing number of LLs, and it's a rule that the Harem enforces too
That aside, keep going and you'll be just fine
