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MadMax · 2004-09-25, 05:29 PM

I'd list it as is, but I've got a couple suggestions for you from a sales standpoint.

There's a lot of text and it seems a bit jumbled and hard to read, like your paragraphs are bleeding together, and there's no reason to have gallery links on your warning page...kinda defeats the purpose of a warning page. It's already been said that you could split that up into two sites, which I probably would since the nurse galleries are perfect for a "uniforms" category (which I have).

Make the sales text stand out a bit more (possibly by making it bigger), use some different text colors for headings so you set them apart from the sales text, and get the gallery links off the warning page.

Just suggestions, and like I said I'd list it as is.

2004-09-25, 05:29 PM	#1
MadMax "Without evil there can be no good, so it must be good to be evil sometimes" ~ Satan Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Motor City, baby, where carjacking was invented! Now GIMME THOSE SHOES! Posts: 2,385	I'd list it as is, but I've got a couple suggestions for you from a sales standpoint. There's a lot of text and it seems a bit jumbled and hard to read, like your paragraphs are bleeding together, and there's no reason to have gallery links on your warning page...kinda defeats the purpose of a warning page. It's already been said that you could split that up into two sites, which I probably would since the nurse galleries are perfect for a "uniforms" category (which I have). Make the sales text stand out a bit more (possibly by making it bigger), use some different text colors for headings so you set them apart from the sales text, and get the gallery links off the warning page. Just suggestions, and like I said I'd list it as is.