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Old 2004-10-29, 11:32 AM   #1
Mister13
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Join Date: Oct 2004
Location: California
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Cool Critique my Free Site win a prize!!!

I'm hoping to increase my non-existant sales and was hoping that someone would be kind enough to critique one of my free sites and tell me what I'm doing wrong.

I'm not doing very well using the link lists and I'm afraid if I don't get some sales soon I will have to eat one of my cats...probably the one with the big juicy legs will go first.

Either way Please check out :
http://www.intimateplayroom.com/vixens/eleiza/1/
and tell me what I'm doing wrong so that I can possibly start getting sales.

Be kind..I have been known to cry like a little girl with a skinned knee.


Thanks in advanced

Oh and there is no prize..it was a cheap ploy to get you in the door ..Im a right bastard and I'm sorry.

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