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Old 2005-08-17, 03:39 AM   #3
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Hi Mikeyx,

The title "Exploitedteens exploitedteens exploited teens.." feels a bit spammy. Some LLs also prefer you create a title unique to the site instead of using the paysite name.

"One Guy and a video camera and his mission , too find the most fresh , young teens ..."

I'd rewrite that to "One guy ..and his mission to find the most fresh," without the space in front of your commas and Guy not capitalized. (not sure if you want to use the phrase "young teens" there).

"Click too get your membership" should be "Click to"

Also your pages are missing doctype and doesn't validate. You might want to make it validate if you want some additional SE traffic.

You have words like "avi" in your keyword meta, which doesn't appear on the page text. You have a slim chance of ranking for words like "avi" anyway, so why use it.

I'd add a third link on the pages to point back to the domain root.

Looks nice overall.
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