Looking not bad but at start I suggest to remove CP keywords - usting word young on a teen site can get you banned quickly. Than I would remove this huge image on top and replace with some nice image/text with name of your site - as I suppose currently its not title of your site and if it is - its bit too long, try to keep your site name within 2-4 words.
Also another hint that rather wouldnt cause the declination - your sale text looks funny with such spelling " ,anyway" or double spaces...
|