Any improvment on free sites making and listing, get listed

[Magix]

So, last week , i /ve made a thread for my first sites. Comments vere, and many of you menchioned my mistakes, wich i tryied to fix. i think i, ve fixed them, but still i'm not always happy with my work, so i decided to show you some new sites witch i've made, Please say some comments, any mistakes please say it to me i need to hear what to change, to get better sales and traffic.

Here links:

http://www.pornomagix.com/freesites/swhard/

http://www.pornomagix.com/freesites/frankf/

http://www.pornomagix.com/freesites/maturta/

the last deep in hole, this i don't like i like more to do gallerie photo free sites, but this time i've doen an experiment on movies, but i think it din't work out well.

http://www.pornomagix.com/freesites/deepin/


So i'm waiting for yuor comments thanks all

[virgohippy]

You can use up to three outgoing links per page. It's in your best interest to find a way to use them on every page.

swhard has too many pics. You can get away with as little as 20 most everywhere, and the cap is usually as high as 30.

I'm not too sure about the "click here to see more" link. And it looks like your links are blind anyway. Tell the surfer where they're going if they click your link.

Also, I consider it standard practice to name the dir of the freesite the same as the name of that freesite.

ex:

pornomagix.com/freesites/swhard/

should instead be:

pornomagix.com/freesites/sweet_hardcore/

or

pornomagix.com/freesites/sweet-hardcore/

[Beaver Bob]

"See here how hot and tight sluts taking huge cocks and getting their pussies dripping with fresh cum"

no disrespect, but you might want to have someone correct the grammar on these sites who has English as their first language.

[alessandro]

http://www.pornomagix.com/freesites/swhard/ <- you have no links to sponsor sites, you're not making money with that page!

http://www.pornomagix.com/freesites/.../Gallery1.html <- 20 pics here, these would be just enought for 2 galleries ( 1 free site ). Also, it isn't just waste of content here, but you're giving way too much content to the surfer, why would he then click to the paysite for more when he can get that much for free?

http://www.pornomagix.com/freesites/frankf/ <- text under that banner is "Click Here and for more girls" ... would you actually click that ? Be more creative, you need tasty sales text to get the surfers click the link and make it to the paysite. Try something like: "Click here to see all hot chicks that Frank fucked so far" or something similar.

Hope this helps a little. Good luck!

[MrYum]

Adding to the valid comments already given

You've got side scroll at 800 wide on the main page of this site;

http://www.pornomagix.com/freesites/swhard/

Side scroll on the main page and galleries of this site;

http://www.pornomagix.com/freesites/frankf/

Side scroll on the entry and main page of this site;

http://www.pornomagix.com/freesites/maturta/

Also, you'll definitely want to brush up on your english and/or have a native english speaker check your sites for you.

On the subject of blind links, this thread should be very helpful;

http://www.greenguysboard.com/board/...ad.php?t=23441

Good luck

[Magix]

Thanks, every one im going to fix it