Review Needed

[Licker4U]

I've been building free sites for five years and only had marginal success. Seven weeks ago I got a new domain and have 41 sites built, submitted and listed. With mirrors there is close to 300 sites. I'm getting listed at LOR, HOES, PenisBot, Smut Gremlins, Richard's Realm, and most of the other link lists listed in the Get Traffic area at GG&J's. My traffic has gone up from around 1,500 hits/day to close to 7,000 hits/day. I'm getting maybe 6 sales/month which sucks. I think I build good sites but evidently there's something I'm missing. If I post some URL's here I'll have 30 non porn buyin' curious webmasters burning up my BW taking a look and only get a few replies. I need someone that is willing to look at some of my sites and tell me what needs to be changed, fixed, modified, etc. Any willing to help?