how are these galleries??

babymaker · 2004-11-06, 05:23 PM

here are 3 recent galleries i made i am pretty new at gallery building but like it much more than free sites! my galleries have been getting accepted amost everywhere i submit so they must be ok and i have 2 partnership accounts i am going to apply for more. just wanted honest opinions on then from people who have been around awhile. plus conversions not so great??? should i change content sales text?? opinions welcomed, thanx!

http://www.x-pix.us/galleries/voyeur/collegespycams/

http://www.x-pix.us/galleries/pregna...smokingfetish/

http://www.x-pix.us/galleries/teen/tabitha/

GeorgeTH · 2004-11-07, 04:51 PM

Don't you know that smoking when pregnant can harm the baby?

LOL

The galleries are very 90s... I don't know if many big sites would still list them. The first (Voyeur Dorm) conflicts with the common rule of most TGPs: series!!! = same person(s) + same background!

Sorry- it's Monday morning - not a time or day to be cheerful

Stouch · 2004-11-09, 01:01 PM

What George says, but I will add a couple more things. On the first try to ditch the URL on the thumbs. Its ok on big pics but doesnt look too good on thumbs.

Second one I agree with George totally

Third one, maybe consider putting it all in a table to try to structure it a bit better. Also if you look at that second row of thumbs, they are too samey. You should maybe consider this:

1st thumb as it is - 2nd thumb a pussy closeup - 3rd thumb maybe as it is or a tits & pussy shot - 4th thumb a close up of her sucking her thumb.

Also try to sharpen the pics a bit.

2004-11-06, 05:23 PM	#1
babymaker Someone Turn Off The Damn Heat! Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: The Sewer....err.philly i mean Posts: 1,366	how are these galleries?? here are 3 recent galleries i made i am pretty new at gallery building but like it much more than free sites! my galleries have been getting accepted amost everywhere i submit so they must be ok and i have 2 partnership accounts i am going to apply for more. just wanted honest opinions on then from people who have been around awhile. plus conversions not so great??? should i change content sales text?? opinions welcomed, thanx! http://www.x-pix.us/galleries/voyeur/collegespycams/ http://www.x-pix.us/galleries/pregna...smokingfetish/ http://www.x-pix.us/galleries/teen/tabitha/ __________________ *Get ElevatedX W/Hosting 99MO!*

2004-11-07, 04:51 PM	#2
GeorgeTH Don't let a programmer design your front-end pages! Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: currently on the road in CA Posts: 781	Don't you know that smoking when pregnant can harm the baby? LOL The galleries are very 90s... I don't know if many big sites would still list them. The first (Voyeur Dorm) conflicts with the common rule of most TGPs: series!!! = same person(s) + same background! Sorry- it's Monday morning - not a time or day to be cheerful __________________ Have a nice day!

2004-11-09, 01:01 PM	#3
Stouch Operator! Give me the number for 911! Join Date: Apr 2003 Posts: 130	What George says, but I will add a couple more things. On the first try to ditch the URL on the thumbs. Its ok on big pics but doesnt look too good on thumbs. Second one I agree with George totally Third one, maybe consider putting it all in a table to try to structure it a bit better. Also if you look at that second row of thumbs, they are too samey. You should maybe consider this: 1st thumb as it is - 2nd thumb a pussy closeup - 3rd thumb maybe as it is or a tits & pussy shot - 4th thumb a close up of her sucking her thumb. Also try to sharpen the pics a bit. __________________ Nowt here