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Marchello · 2004-12-10, 06:21 PM

Just finished three galeries.
I need but i really need your opinioun because i'm looking forward for requesting parnter account from some TGP's.
Well galleries:
1st:
http://www.nastyplace.com/galerp/
Hot babe Christine
It was night and cold as ice, when i met Christine in Copenhagen
Toys

2nd:
http://www.nastyplace.com/galerp/dva/
Petite cutie get wet
Hey everyone, my name is Emily and I just turned 18
Toys

3rd:
http://www.nastyplace.com/galerp/tri/
New nude girl
Horny slut playing with herself

Please any tip is more then needed,
help me because i want to became trusted partner.
Marchello

GeorgeTH · 2004-12-10, 10:08 PM

...not too bad!

First of all I would loose the border frames, at least between the images! But that might be my taste!

Now you're giving each gallery a header, but why as a graphic? More work, less effective with search engines! The header is a great idea, repeat it in the title (what you did already) and put it on top of the gallery in <h1> tags! You can give it a fancy look with CSS (dropshadow, etc.)

I find some of your images overcompressed (and showing it)! I have no problems getting listed with images of 720-760 pixels on the long side = then you don't have to compress that much to get the same file size... I believe many TGPs are looking for clean images rather than large ones...

I personally think it's always better to put everything related to the gallery inside the table; on the first gallery you have the first link above the table = seperates it too much.

I would put he 2257 thing onto a different page, or format it into a small table (runs wide on my screen!) and in a much smaller font (8px or so).

FAZIT: I would give you a partner account if you're not thinking about cheating (redirecting, etc.)

Useless · 2004-12-10, 10:11 PM

I have some general advice after reviewing all three of them.

Galleries don't require titles, so you can and should drop them. That space is better used for a graphic header ad.

You need to really work on your descriptions. They must describe the content seen on the gallery, not background story. Descriptions should always be in third person, not first. You'll find some places will only give you 17 characters for a description and some will give you 35-75. Have a few versions of varying lengths prepared.

Drop those table borders. They look very 90's.

You have some nice big pics, as large as 1200px, but they are getting just a bit grainy. Optimize them down to 600-800 px on the long side and keep them clear. Clear is a better than big, unless it's a cock, in which case bigger is better.

Don't use the word 'more' in links. That will get you rejected a many places. Also, don't use questions that can be answered with 'no' in your supporting text. Tell the surfers what they want, don't ask them.

Useless · 2004-12-10, 10:14 PM

Doh! Looks like George responded while I was still typing. Notice that we pretty much agree.

2004-12-10, 06:21 PM	#1
Marchello The only guys who wear Hawaiian shirts are gay guys and big fat party animals Join Date: Aug 2004 Posts: 179	Please take a look Just finished three galeries. I need but i really need your opinioun because i'm looking forward for requesting parnter account from some TGP's. Well galleries: 1st: http://www.nastyplace.com/galerp/ Hot babe Christine It was night and cold as ice, when i met Christine in Copenhagen Toys 2nd: http://www.nastyplace.com/galerp/dva/ Petite cutie get wet Hey everyone, my name is Emily and I just turned 18 Toys 3rd: http://www.nastyplace.com/galerp/tri/ New nude girl Horny slut playing with herself Please any tip is more then needed, help me because i want to became trusted partner. Marchello

2004-12-10, 10:08 PM	#2
GeorgeTH Don't let a programmer design your front-end pages! Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: currently on the road in CA Posts: 781	...not too bad! First of all I would loose the border frames, at least between the images! But that might be my taste! Now you're giving each gallery a header, but why as a graphic? More work, less effective with search engines! The header is a great idea, repeat it in the title (what you did already) and put it on top of the gallery in <h1> tags! You can give it a fancy look with CSS (dropshadow, etc.) I find some of your images overcompressed (and showing it)! I have no problems getting listed with images of 720-760 pixels on the long side = then you don't have to compress that much to get the same file size... I believe many TGPs are looking for clean images rather than large ones... I personally think it's always better to put everything related to the gallery inside the table; on the first gallery you have the first link above the table = seperates it too much. I would put he 2257 thing onto a different page, or format it into a small table (runs wide on my screen!) and in a much smaller font (8px or so). FAZIT: I would give you a partner account if you're not thinking about cheating (redirecting, etc.) __________________ Have a nice day!

2004-12-10, 10:11 PM	#3
Useless Certified Nice Person Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Dirty Undies, NY Posts: 11,268	I have some general advice after reviewing all three of them. Galleries don't require titles, so you can and should drop them. That space is better used for a graphic header ad. You need to really work on your descriptions. They must describe the content seen on the gallery, not background story. Descriptions should always be in third person, not first. You'll find some places will only give you 17 characters for a description and some will give you 35-75. Have a few versions of varying lengths prepared. Drop those table borders. They look very 90's. You have some nice big pics, as large as 1200px, but they are getting just a bit grainy. Optimize them down to 600-800 px on the long side and keep them clear. Clear is a better than big, unless it's a cock, in which case bigger is better. Don't use the word 'more' in links. That will get you rejected a many places. Also, don't use questions that can be answered with 'no' in your supporting text. Tell the surfers what they want, don't ask them. __________________ Click here to purchase a bridge I'm selling.

2004-12-10, 10:14 PM	#4
Useless Certified Nice Person Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Dirty Undies, NY Posts: 11,268	Doh! Looks like George responded while I was still typing. Notice that we pretty much agree. __________________ Click here to purchase a bridge I'm selling.