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oke is it ready for submitting?
http://www.sexstoryhome.com/eroticsexstories/index.html my first story site ever not my last i can tell you, i had now finaly time to finish it, is it oke like this? (yeah yeah linkbacks need to be up)
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A woman is like beer. They look good, they smell good, and you'd step over your own mother just to get one!
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imho - try to add warning notices and exit button
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"Without evil there can be no good, so it must be good to be evil sometimes" ~ Satan
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I think it looks good, and I'd list it as is.
The only thing that jumps out at me is that the edges of the big "filthy letters" look pixellated. |
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Took the hint.
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The graphics look a little fuzzy... transparent stuff sometimes gets like that.
The stories themselves are as old as the hills. You might have a problem getting listed in some places with older content like that. Other than that, you seem pretty much good to go. Alex |
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