Instant Review Please:)

dalimil · 2006-03-28, 01:49 PM

Hello guys and girls... I'd need some input about my first free page...

http://allurebabes.com/hot-blonde-babe-Adriana/

Let me know, what am I missing, what I did totally wrong and what should I certainly improve.

Thanks a lot!

I read many reviews and I think it's great that you take your time to evaluate and help others!!!

Greenguy · 2006-03-28, 02:05 PM

"enter" in the link to the sponsor is not allowed on most LL's

pics are out of order (unless she decided to get dressed again before the 2nd gallery)

the 1st 2 pages don't match the galleries as far as the color schemes go

MrYum · 2006-03-28, 03:39 PM

Adding to GG's points...

I get a slight side scroll at 800 wide on the index.

The 'hot babes' link on the index is borderline blind. Yes, you do have the sponsor name in small text below it...but it's a close call given the font size. I'd probably let it slide if the rest of the site was good.

On the main page, the Enter link to the paysite...again, borderline blind. Yes, it mentions the sponsor name...but also uses the word galleries. The surfer is looking for the free site galleries. If not a blind link...could definitely be considered deceptive since I don't find 'galleries' when I go to that paysite.

Some reviewers will consider the thumb like images at the bottom of your galleries as blind links as well. If that series of images had a big 'Sponsor Name' on em...they'd probably be okay.

Lastly, some folks will decline you for the heavy weight of your full size images. I only checked a couple, but they were both well over 100k. Try to optimize your images to hit between 50-70k and you'll be better off.

That's all I got

DJilla · 2006-03-29, 11:29 AM

In addition to the above IMHO: kinda of a fresh clean look to your index page. You don't have to dedicate every and all of a page to a single sponsor. You could get a few extra sales opportunities off of that main page. Same as your content pages, isn't that the same model? Maybe a different model or diffrent sponsor altogether. Finally, no sense in wasting the text in your TITLE tags advertsiing your own site. Better to use them to add text describing the content and repeating the TITLE text AND add a little more text to the CONTENT tag.

Good Luck

2006-03-28, 01:49 PM	#1
dalimil Internet! Is that thing still around? Join Date: Mar 2006 Posts: 1	Instant Review Please:) Hello guys and girls... I'd need some input about my first free page... http://allurebabes.com/hot-blonde-babe-Adriana/ Let me know, what am I missing, what I did totally wrong and what should I certainly improve. Thanks a lot! I read many reviews and I think it's great that you take your time to evaluate and help others!!!

2006-03-28, 02:05 PM	#2
Greenguy The Original Greenguy (Est'd 1996) & AVN HOF Member - I Crop Pics For Thumbs In My Sleep Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: Blasdell, NY (shithole suburb south of Buffalo) Posts: 41,929	"enter" in the link to the sponsor is not allowed on most LL's pics are out of order (unless she decided to get dressed again before the 2nd gallery) the 1st 2 pages don't match the galleries as far as the color schemes go __________________ Promote POV Porn Cash By Building & Submitting Galleries to the Porn Luv Network

2006-03-28, 03:39 PM	#3
MrYum Arghhhh...submit yer sites ya ruddy swabs! Join Date: May 2004 Location: Sunny Florida! Posts: 5,108	Adding to GG's points... I get a slight side scroll at 800 wide on the index. The 'hot babes' link on the index is borderline blind. Yes, you do have the sponsor name in small text below it...but it's a close call given the font size. I'd probably let it slide if the rest of the site was good. On the main page, the Enter link to the paysite...again, borderline blind. Yes, it mentions the sponsor name...but also uses the word galleries. The surfer is looking for the free site galleries. If not a blind link...could definitely be considered deceptive since I don't find 'galleries' when I go to that paysite. Some reviewers will consider the thumb like images at the bottom of your galleries as blind links as well. If that series of images had a big 'Sponsor Name' on em...they'd probably be okay. Lastly, some folks will decline you for the heavy weight of your full size images. I only checked a couple, but they were both well over 100k. Try to optimize your images to hit between 50-70k and you'll be better off. That's all I got __________________ Porno Flixxx Submissions SOTI Site Submissions Free Porn Resource Submissions

2006-03-29, 11:29 AM	#4
DJilla You can now put whatever you want in this space :) Join Date: Sep 2005 Posts: 525	In addition to the above IMHO: kinda of a fresh clean look to your index page. You don't have to dedicate every and all of a page to a single sponsor. You could get a few extra sales opportunities off of that main page. Same as your content pages, isn't that the same model? Maybe a different model or diffrent sponsor altogether. Finally, no sense in wasting the text in your TITLE tags advertsiing your own site. Better to use them to add text describing the content and repeating the TITLE text AND add a little more text to the CONTENT tag. Good Luck __________________ Submit Free Sites, Blogs, Movies, TGP's, Triple XXX Info